8/23/21
Todays Reading Task
Characters:
Brown/Darcy is the judge
Red is bears lawyer/Darcy
Blue/Youssef is Goldilocks lawyer
Green/Youssef is Baby bear
Yellow is Mother bear/Darcy
Pink is Father bear/Hussain
Grey is Goldilocks /Hussain
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This is the case of the three Bear
So what is this case abou….. THAT GIRL WENT IN MY HOUSE AND BROKE MY CHAIR!!!... Ammm ok so young lady what is your name my name is Goldilocks More like Goldilocks the thief… SHHHH it is not your turn to speak Sorry mr boss I SAID IT WAS NOT YOUR TURN TO SPEAK…. Ok so what is the story… Ok so Goldilocks was walking in the forest to pick berry for her sick mother when she found a house and by the way she is only 5 so she went into the house and she was VERY VERY hungry so she decided to eat the porridge on the table because she was hungry and she didn't want it to go to waste... THAT WAS MY PORRIDGE!... ENOUGH!!... SHE'S SUCH A BRAT!... I SAID ENOUGH! SHUT YOUR MOUTH! Ok so uhh hehe please continue…. SO yeah she ate the porridge but to be honest it's just porridge and she didn't do anything else bad you see… YOU LIAR, I HAVE A WHOLE LIST OF WHAT SHE DID. I'M GOING TO SUE HER AND HER BIG FAT… SILENCE! Is there anything else you want to say? No that's.. that's all I have to say... Ok well then let's hear the bear's lawyer… Ahem, this little thick chunky chungus also broke baby bear's chair which might've been a 2 million dollar kids GUCCI CHAIR and she went to sleep on the father's bed.. SHE PUT BED BUGS ON MY BED. SHE MIGHT'VEALSO SPREAD CORONAVIRUS ALL OVER MY BED TOO. HUHHH How dare you ca… SILENCE!!
I really like this and it's also very funny.
ReplyDeleteThat was a really really good post and it was really funny😂
ReplyDeleteNice work.
This is really funny
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Hussain. I love the humour you show through your writing. I notice that you give the characters a lot of personality, which is wonderful. I wonder if next time you could use the persuasive structure we talked about in class to help clarify what you believe and persuade your readers more, SEE (statement, explanation, examples).
ReplyDeleteFROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteKai Ora Hussain
I enjoyed reading your writing Hussain. The size of the text made it very easy to read. I noticed you used underlining and words in capital letters to emphasize what was being said. I look forward to reading your next blog. From Mrs A
Awesome work Hussain! this was really funny
ReplyDeleteWOW! Amazing. Next time post something that you've done more work on because you only wrote a few words when we said you could help us with the Goldilocks story.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to your next blog!